by Amenirenas
First time effort and ESL, so any and all feedback would be truly appreciated.😉
I am dripping wet after reading about the slaves being forced to sit on the phallus in the witness chair, and the judge delivering electroshock to elicit truthful testimony in front of a packed courtroom. I shudder at the thought of experiencing such pain and degradation.
Please write more. You have a deliciously wicked imagination.
Good start. I’m looking forward to more. Please spend a little more time on how the slaves got there and what their daily lives are like. Are they all criminals ?? How long has this society been like this? Get into more humiliation and punishment You have a good imagination the next chapters will be even better
Hi, really, thanks a lot. Since the story is essentially just slice of life vignettes and I intend to keep it going for some time, if you have a particular idea or scenario you'd like to read, just tell me and I will work it in.😄
I liked this story very much. Creative. I hope to see more cases in further chapters.
just as u describe it.
@ anonymous... if you worked in a lowly courtroom you would known... people are flatout stupid and borderline insane. :o)
ESL? Very impressive. Your stories were short, cute, and fun. I feel bad for the vice kid, jeepers.
But if her buy out price is half what she was sold for, why doesn't that lady just buy her freedom again? Sounds like she has ample money by now