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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This was very hot, but Iโ€™m not clear on how they are โ€œconnected โ€œ. I get how their mouth is connected to the jar, but what happens at the other โ€œendโ€? Hope you continue this.

alphafallenboysalphafallenboysabout 1 year agoAuthor

Hello Anonymous Glad you liked the story. The pipe is in the centre would be a part of the holding process, although i was vague on purpose, Nano tech in the story does turn the person into an object more, so be it alive in many ways they have no function as a human. Human flesh light story may be of interested as well as N.N>O>W too. Both have same technology in them.

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Often I write stories about demons and witchcraft. My stories are mostly gay sex or erotic slavery. I write about morphing and sub humans. A lot of fantasy/Sci-fi too, and I Love BDSM.

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