by CharlestonAce
@FailedScout - thanks for taking time to read my story and leave feedback. I deliberately wanted to play with narrative in this one because I enjoy "origin" stories but also appreciate seeing a more evolved relationship. Some of the transitions were a bit more jarring than others. But my favorite "discovery" through writing this was creating the Mistress Morrigan character. Expect to see her in future stories with more linear narratives. Cheers!
It was two very hot stories but I hated the way that it jumped back and for the between the two. It would have been 5 stars but this way, it felt more like 3 stars.
Thank you for writing and posting here.