All Comments on 'Sleep Paralysis Ch. 02'

Intriguing seductive and fun exploration. Had a bit of trouble trying to imagine the contorted bed scene from description, which detracted a smidge from erotic feeling; that and a couple of lines that seemed a bit out of place/like out of a harlequin romance: “… give me what I desire!" And “How dare you tease me as I offer myself up to you!" Yet, it is her “dream”, so … . Now the frustrated yell at the end of the scene was perfect: “All I want is an orgasm!" And she certainly enjoyed that in the hot re-imagined club scene. Looking forward to how her fate is sealed. Enjoying your imagination.

Intriguing seductive exploration. Like the “sleep paralysis” premise. Had a bit of trouble trying to imagine the contorted bed scene — detracted a smidge from erotic feeling; that and a couple of lines that seemed a bit out of place/like out of a harlequin romance: “… give me what I desire!" And “How dare you tease me as I offer myself up to you!" Yet, it is her “dream”, so … . Now the frustrated yell at the end of the scene was perfect: “All I want is an orgasm!" And she certainly enjoyed that in the hot re-imagined club scene. Looking forward to how her fate is sealed.