All Comments on 'Slowly Changing Pt. 04'

I am enjoying the series an amazing amount. Thanks for your efforts.

Clay

really? serum? she went from being cold to blowing him, but then you say she jerked him off. I dunno, continuity issues, very short chapters all add up to kind of a decent idea executed poorly. I'd like you to continue, I hope you improve for future chapters.

Now with the help of some chemical injections there are boobies. If only it was that simple, nice creative touch though. It seems that Christy is now leaning towards being a mildly dominant girlfriend. I look forward to reading more on the transition happening.

I do hope you continue with this as it was rather nice reading.

I agree on the shark-jumping. Why not refine each part until it's ready to fit with the other one. The initial enthusiasm here doesn't mean the author should just slack off and throw up parts without refining each one.

LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT CHAPTER

Nicely written and imaginative please continue.

I'm enjoying your story, but you need to take a bit more care with the phrasing. Nice touch with the serum. I also like the way that Christy's character is developing.

Keep writing, I am looking forward to the next part, Still 5*

The story is very entertaining, but you do need to keep it flowing, not jumping around. I love it, altho I got a little distracted, Please to write more, and even longer chapters with more detail.

i want more does he become full woman how far does he go with the changes

I am going to promise atleast two more chapters. I do plan on this ending by at the latest part 12. At this point though I am going to take more time constructing each part (as suggested by several readers) and making them more thought out. Thank you all for your support and sorry for the sizable wait time.

love it keep writing

Great story please go on

like where this is going. normally not so intrigued by science stories, but this feels good

I just finished reading all four chapters. It is well written and very erotic. I hope the author is thinking about continuing it.

loving every chapter, as a heel lover don't forget about him going everywhere in 4 to 5 inch heels!

Very impressive!

Erotic storyline of a male doing something that he wanted to become and was forced to do to survive. I have read all 4 chapters and it is pleasantly different from most feminization storylines that I have read.

oh my god what a good story. one could only wish to have such a friend.This kind of thing would be a dream.What would it be like to have a couple more of those shots. I would love to be a guinea pig .pick me pick me selma holes alberta canada

I KNOW IT HAS BEEN A LONG TIME SINCE YOU WROTE THIS...BUT, WISH YOU WOULD ADD MORE CHAPTERS, PLEASE...! BETTY jo xoxo

And left her after cleaning out then bank accounts. She never heard from him or saw him again. Epically stupid story

I hope there is more coming.

Why haven’t you finished this story? It started out really well, shame you didn’t continue!

I think that this is wonderful story, and that you need to and more to it. It’s just a very nice situation that we have all had dreams of being able to make it happen. Please finish your story.

This is very upsetting, this is a fabulous story, one of the better stories that I have read. It has been over 7 years since this chapter was written and the writer has left the story hanging. After 7 years it is highly unlikely that the story will ever be completed. I do wonder why the writer left a popular story hanging, possibly something happened to the writer???

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Veronica

Great story. You left me needing more. I need to see how you want the story to go. I hope you finish the story

Hot story line. The door is open for the next chapter. Wish I could find a friend like her.