All Comments on 'Slut, Uncommon'

disgusting

live life freely and enjoy it as much as we can. that's my motto in life and my husband happily second that.lol....

Oh i like this - short to the point and its nice to have a girl who is greedy!

Okay, so most of the story was about the hours leading up to her big night. Then we get two minutes of unimaginative sex with multicolored men. I'd rather hear less about her aunt and the color of her car and more detail and description (NOT about the men's names or skin tones) about the main event.

I didn't even finish your story because your description made me laugh. A size 16 woman would in no way have a size 46 bra. Unless she was shaped like a triangle. Which is bizarre. Try about a 38 or 40. Do a lil research babes... and try again.

not a bad tale, just a bit rushed. And then there's this line "his 14 inch cock that was 3 inches long". Proofreading will or should catch errors of that sort.