by MaryAnn678
You've managed to create another memorable character. Well done, MaryAnn.
This one works! Great story.
Congratulations MaryAnn to a very exciting story. It´s a master piece with the build up of tension then relaxing for a bit until it climbs steadily towards a lovely climax. As always you write very efficient. A full story is told with remarkable few words but witout anything missing. And that includes the arousing fuck scene as well. No excess words just very erotic. Thank you
Congratulations Mary Ann to another lovely story. it´s a master piece with first a build up of tension and expectations and then relaxation before the build up towards the lovey climax. You write so efficient using a language that allows you to tell a full story with remarkable few words but without missing anything. And that includes the very erotic fuck scene.
Thank you.
Classy work! Bravo!
You have a definite gift for subtle wit.
Or brassy, as the particular story and character demands.
I'm genuinely impressed!
It's a well-written story, I just don't get their need to have the procreation be a wonderful passionate thing once they found out that Charles was sterile. It works for them, so there's no conflict there. But since I wasn't able to buy their rationalisation, it took me out of the story a bit.