All Comments on 'Smartphone Spellbook Ch. 04'

2 words: LONGER CHAPTERS

I think my main issue right now are that these are short chapters. This has so much potential, if a variety of directions. It's sad to see these are so short.

Your story's are well written and a great story line please more ..

Fantastic chapters! I appreciate your posting one a day to keep your audience following the developing story. Thanks for having a back story for the demon in the phone to make the magic believable.

Yes longer chapters please. You just get started good then bam end of the chapter

..., wouldn't want to delay future chapters. Keep doing what you are and I'll keep enjoying.

Shorter, well written chapters are allowing for character and story development. Anticipation is a good thing. Magic and sex. As a Tolkien fan, I salute you.

"... Anna laid on her bed with her hand how hair panties ..."?

WHAT??

No a bad storyline BUT these one page chapters are really fucking annoying..

You definitely need to proof read what you post, interesting idea, but short chapters and lousy spelling/grammar is doing my head in. 4⭐️ Because it’s original, now please buck up!

"age appeared in front of him, showing Anna laid on her bed with her hand how hair panties and her breasts"

All good fun

4/5