All Comments on 'Smoking Hot Ch. 14'

Thus story might set a new standard for Literotica quality.

Great storyline, dialogue, dialect, characters (I'm in love with Dan). No question, I will gladly read every word Kumquatqueen ever writes.

Not only delightfully readable, but grammatical!

Thank you! For the last few weeks have been waiting for each installment. Was late for work today as had to complete the series. Awesome.

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I'm geeky enough to find "Not only delightfully readable, but grammatical" an even higher compliment than making someone late for work!

Future stories will be delayed by my returning to work - the existence of this series is down to Covid forcing me to stay in bed and occasionally tap away while under the influence of many drugs. Please enjoy my back catalogue in the meantime.

Great story, amazing characters And dialogue! Dan and Ade need a sequel where Dan begs Ade to fuck him.

Fantastic ending! In love your writing and your characters. Real people who have fun, hot, consensual, kinky sex makes for a great story!

Lovely to have people enjoying my characters!

For more of Adrian and Dan's adventures, please go read my story 'Turkish Delight', where they go on holiday about a year after meeting.

Wow, this was fantastic. Personally, I’ve always cared much more about characters than the sex itself in my fiction of this nature. And this delivers on that perfectly. Thank you very much for taking me on this journey.