All Comments on 'Snow White'

Witty and sexy! Love it!

i bet walt is spinning in his grave by now, but probably with envy! you've captured the esence of the story and made it pleasing to a whole new audience...i shudder to think what's next!

I liked the story and the premise was great. As soon as I saw your's in the "NEW" list I clicked on it right away. My only disappointment was I wanted a greater quantity and juicier quality of sex details. I'm a bit disappointed when a so-called "sex scene", particularly the "money-shot", is a simple one-liner comprised of a quick cum-and-on-with-the-plot. I think you were a bit too rushed to get back to the fantasy aspect. But! This is but my opinion!

Your rendition of Snow White is truly exotic and erotic. I hope you can do some more fairy tales, Beauty and the Beast, Cinderella, The Little Mermaid.

It's been a while since I've read anything here that feels new and fresh. A marvelous debut story, lots of imagination and wit. Do write more, and it doesn't have to be another fairy tale. I'd like to see what you do with real people in real situations, perhaps something autobiographical? Anyway, well done. Thank you.

This is the best snow white tory on this site! And that's saying something!