All Comments on 'So This is What I Am? Ch. 01'

I love a slut! I wish that more women believed that the word "Slut" was a badge of honor. There is nothing wrong with embracing your sexuality.

Please continue.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

I loved the story, it was perfectly laid out and I’m looking forward to reading the next and further episodes. Billy

I look forward to the next chapter....

Excellent sory, well paced, Well done.d just descrptive enough to keep the reader interested. Looking forward to the next.

Not bad at all, looking forward to the next chapter

btw you can always get a editor (lots on here) to help with the minor grammar issues still easy enough to read !

You've really done a nice job in introducing us to the main character. We can see that there is just something a little off with him, shyness and inexperience, but perhaps something more as well. We'll be interested to see how things develop. The English is not perfect, but it is readable, and its "foreign accent" adds a bit of exotic flavor. Well done.

Why does the note say there's incest content? I mean... if you squint at it hard enough... maybe the kiss with his brother's taste in it, but really...

Ugh, maybe I'm just too much of a perv, haha.