All Comments on 'So Young!'

Hot and heavy...masterful. More, please!

I liked the way the story sketched it without describing it to a T. We got what mattered, including what was in her head. Very sexy story, refreshing. I have a vaguely similar tale called "Mrs. Lambfinger of the 9th Grade," you might be interested to check it out.

One of the very fine things about your story is PRECISELY the vagueness of the relationship. Go for more, twoworlds, you are good.

The work situation that connected the characters couldn't have been more vague. Except for their ages, there were no physical descriptions of the characters. Try using one of the volunteer editors in the future.

let her teach him how to please a woman........very good I loved it because it was like a quickie....and after the quickies comes the sensual sex.......don't stop