All Comments on 'Soccer Mom'

Nicely written, although mayb e check for some typos.

Likde build up and character setup.

I love how you have set up the possibility of some blackmail :)

Great read, written so that the story can go in many different directions. Hopefully there will be a continuation

Then it becomes rape. And racists are scum.

There is something about a "Soccer Mom" that really gets me going. This one certainly did!

Love her in sexy heels. Looking forward to more

Yes, yes. Thoughtfully executed. She will be back, but he will need to act as if he is not concerned if she has issues. The more control he takes the better she will perform her 'duty' and the longer she will be at his beckon call.

I find this story hard to believe from the start. Women aren't easy to seduce & second, I hate reading or seeing a mature women with a bald pussy. That's so pre-woman like. Didn't even finish the story. Sorry.

Your English skills need a lot of work. Also, you lost me in the first half.