by Heybuddy65
The close of this chapter is so beautifully intense; the riveting sex reveals so much about their relationship. You have created two believably real characters wrapped up in something real. Your plot thickens. You know where you are taking us and as a near hopeless romantic I have my preferences. xxxxx
Brill. I hope you are not going to leave us hanging, I would love to read how you solve Carols dilemma.
Lovely! I'm really enjoying the conversations between the two woman next to and while having the sex scenes, it gives off a mature vibe and is really refreshing to read. Carol does surprise me sometime, when talking charge of falling deeper, like now with this kiss. It's also nice to look into the relationship she has with Paul (from Carols point of view). 5 stars and I'm looking forward on how this will play out!