All Comments on 'Soccer Women Ch. 02'

This series is so awesome. You have written a wonderful story and I cannot wait for the next part. I hope to see it sooner rather than later.

FREAKING FINALLY! I am so glad Jessica bumped this along…it’s been killing me, I find the moms storyline just to be the best. It’s more like a real romance. I know the ups and downs make the story but I need more sunshine and rainbows in my life now. Keep up the great storytelling. Thanks

I have read the whole series and one thing I noticed was that Carol is potrayed as always putting others before herself. That was not the case when she cheated on her husband with Jen, nor when she got mad at Jen when she got tired of being a third wheel and got into a relationship. I did not think telling her children the day of their dad's funeral that they were swingers was putting her children first. In real life I can not imagine the children would be so causal about a bomb shell like that.

You know you could break out several characters into their own series. I’d love to see Jess and Meg find love