All Comments on 'Society Ch. 03'

Than you for writing. Please proof read your story.

Wendy should always start with a Capital "W". Lots of places small "w".

What here, (should be have been Wait Here).

Thank you for pointing out my errors. I read it through repeatedly but was so excited, these being my first postings, I obviously missed some elementary mistakes. Much appreciate you bringing them to my attention, will try to calm down and do better next time!

Wendy

Very cool I really won't this to keep going she is a very lucky girl

when answering that illiterate Anonymous. But it seem to be your nature.

I really like your writing. Usually I'd say I am neither domme nor submissive, but reading your experiences makes me suspicious if I slightly tend your direction ... When you were allowed to masturbate in the first chapter (I believe it never happened but is your phantasy that gets you hot) I sighed with arousal.

But there are no German women named Gretchen.

when answering that illiterate Anonymous. But it seem to be your nature.

I really like your writing. Usually I'd say I am neither domme nor submissive, but reading your experiences makes me suspicious if I slightly tend your direction ... When you were allowed to masturbate in the first chapter (I believe it never happened but is your phantasy that gets you hot) I sighed with arousal.

But there are no German women named Gretchen.

Thank you for your kind comments Hanna and I’m glad you liked the story.

You are right, this is (mostly) just my fantasy, but I’m glad you found it arousing all the same.

Sorry, my mistake. I thought Gretchen was a German girl’s name. Oh well, there is at least one woman named Gretchen now, if only in my little dream world.

If there were more than five stars to be awarded, this deserves them. A first-class ride through Wendy’s subspace - thank you x