All Comments on 'Some Adventures after Our Journey Ch. 03'

Interesting exploration of this lifestyle. It's an imaginative look at their particular take on the psychology, ethics and taboos of their particular version of this lifestyle.

I like your writing style, shame about one or two errors that editing would put right.

The second series is clearly pure fantasy, but that is what Lit readers are looking for I think.

Those of us who have ventured into ‘adventures’ like yours agree with your attitudes even though they have not gone quite as far as yours.

Lacking in any emotional context, either between husband and wife or any other of the participants. The only two that seem to be developing a relationship are Maddie and Tom.

Pigs playing in the mud.

Very Naughty! Really enjoyed it! 5 STARS!