All Comments on 'Some Changes in Dana'

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Thumper311Thumper311almost 2 years ago

Simply awesome, it would be a shame if a few chapters weren't added to this story.

HoltarenHoltarenalmost 2 years ago

Fantastic story. Very well written. A dream situation. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That deserves a Carlsberg and a continuation

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4ualmost 2 years ago

Well she certainly came out of her shell, one can well imagine how their get togethers ;) went after that

5 stars

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunalmost 2 years ago

Well written as always. Great Story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

With a little discipline you could have easily gotten this Dow to a readable one page.

jcus0511jcus0511about 1 year ago

OST enjoyable story a very easy read and although predictable in getting to the end I as the reader felt rewarded. I welcomed the ending & invitation to imagine other adventures of Dana with the others.

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