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Click hereI don't think I'll be seeing Valerie anymore. She has hopes of getting serious and even though I do like her the spark just isn't there. I mean don't get me wrong we have fun and I enjoy my time with her but not like when I'm with Toni. That's the other problem, even though I have Valerie, Toni's the one on my mind all the time. I'm not good at dating, I'm more of the monogamous type.
Doesn't it suck when you want the one thing you can't have.
Hey babe.. This story is so damn good can't wait for the next chapter... Please continue.. All the best
You're a tremendous writer...love your work...hope you continue this story :)
I desperately want to know where this story goes...but now I also want you to write a ch. 2 to your kitty and santa story. I cant decide which I want more!
I can'i wait for the next chapter;but I can't wait for the next Santa chapter either. Please keep writing. I look forward to your first novel or is it already out there? ChristieP
Great story but I definately need a 3rd chapter to make it better. Thumbs up!!
That was a great story! Thanks. Fabulous as is but I'd love to see it develop more.
Honestly, I don't care whether this story continues or not. It has been perfect; and leaving it right where it is would be perfect. What I do care about is that you continue to write for us, whether it's the continuation of this story or a new one. Amazingly clear images. Beautiful, realistic dialogue --- both the self-talk of each of them as well as the chatter between them. Thank you.
I desperately hope there's going to be more. The first two chapters were very well written and I have to know if they let go and just be together. Keep it coming!!
The one thing that makes a good story, when the end is right at your fingertips. Like life this makes you happy, but what you wish for tomorrow puts the stars on today.
Well written there are many flavours in our sexuality, but love is its pinnacle that will come the next day.
Janice
Dont wait so long for part three! Please finish it or keep going. Superb writing. You rock. 5 Stars!
Really exquisite writing. I love where this appears to be going. But surprises are good too. Keep up the wonderful writing and thanks for sharing.
For the love of all things holy, please hurry with the next chapter. This is building so nicely I've got a sweat on just thinking where this will end up!