All Comments on 'Someday . . .'

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Scorpio44Scorpio44over 13 years ago
Just a little confusing

The title is "Someday" and everything in the story happens in a few hours. In my mind someday is anticipation. Perhaps the entire story was anticipation and would happen... someday. If that is what was intended then it needed more development. I have a story with the same title in mature. I wanted to see how someone else would address the title concept.

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