Something New Something Old Ch. 03

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Ted was getting angry. "Who the fuck do you think you are, Nancy," he said, "You don't tell me what to do."

At this, Sarah spoke up, "Nancy's right, Ted. You don't have a choice any more, at least not any choice you will like. If you want me to be your wife, you will do exactly what Nancy is telling you to do right now." Sarah's voice was flat and matter-of-fact. Ted was stunned by this threat from her.

"Sarah, you don't mean that," Ted said, hurt. "We've played this game and it was fun. It's time to stop. I love you, Sarah, don't do this."

Sarah continued, "Shut up, sissy. We are not talking about this anymore. I told you the deal. Now you have a choice. Pack your shit and get out of here. Or just shut up and do what you are told."

Ted was silent now. He couldn't believe what was happening. He was angry. At the same time, his dick was hard as a rock again. Sarah had ratcheted this to a new level through her threat. Ted was not sure if she meant it, but her tone of voice did not suggest that she was kidding.

Ted contemplated this predicament. He decided he was not ready to take the chance to lose Sarah. He would play along.

Suddenly submissive, Ted said, "I'm sorry Mistress Sarah. And, I'm sorry Mistress Nancy. I won't say anything else."

Nancy walked to Ted and smacked him hard in the face with her open hand. Sarah got up and did the same. It hurt, but Ted accepted it.

Josh was back. He was holding a nasty looking wooden paddle with holes drilled in it. Ted cringed. Nancy ordered, "Bend over the bed, sissy. Now." Ted did so, suddenly afraid of her anger and hoping she might take it easy on him if he did what he was told.

Nancy took the paddle from Josh. Josh looked at Ted and gave him an "I'm sorry" look. Josh knew perfectly well what it felt like to be on the receiving end of that paddle.

Ted was in position, his feet planted on the floor, his ass pointed out, his hands and arms on the bed.

Nancy said, "Ten strokes, sissy. Count them off."

Ted heard the paddle whistle and then felt the explosion on his ass. He screamed.

"Count them out, faggot!" Nancy demanded. "You are getting one more for not following orders," she said.

Ted braced himself. The paddle whistled, then the crash came into his sensitive skin. Ted screamed out, "One!" Nancy swung again and connected. Ted screamed, "Two!" He started to cry. His ass was on fire.

Nancy swung again and again as Ted counted. He was sobbing by the time he reached nine. Nancy handed the paddle to Sarah. Sarah swung the last blow, and Ted cried, "Ten!"

Ted lay on the bed crying. He had never hurt so badly. Nancy pulled him up. Ted's dick was limp from the pain. She put the cage back on him and locked the padlock. Nancy took the key for the cage off her necklace and handed it to Sarah.

Nancy said, "Sarah, how long do you think is appropriate for sissy's next release date from the cage?"

"Three months," Sarah said firmly.

"Excellent," Nancy replied. "Now go in the guest room and think about what you have done here, sissy," Nancy ordered. "The three of us are going to play for a while. In the morning, you will clean Josh's mess out of Sarah since I'm giving you a pass on cleaning up your own mess right now."

Ted struggled to put his red panties on. Even those hurt on his red and sensitive ass.

Ted walked dejectedly from the room. As he walked down the hall, he could hear Sarah begging Josh to fuck her. Ted started crying again.

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chefjess2039chefjess20399 months ago

glad this story line ended no consent equals rape ted should leave the whore & the evil neighbors

jon991gjon991gover 1 year ago

This story had so much potential, then just deteriorated into a cruel wife cuckold wimp husband story, any actual love was lost.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I don’t know about you, but to me, “No” means “No!”

I love dominant wife stories, But I prefer those in which hubby seeks out being submissive, or at least is agreeable to it. This isn’t it. Also I have longed to find a story in which the wife gets so giddy into her power that she becomes so cruel and so hateful that the husband finally has to say, “NO.”

Then we have a story exploring whether or not they can salvage their marriage. This could have been it, but is not finished. J.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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Ted should either kill them or chain them in the basement and break them down and build them up up into slaves. Severe body modifications, bandage, chastity, piercings, etc.

Sissyjackie2008Sissyjackie2008almost 5 years ago
Loved it. Please do more.

I just love this story. As a bisexual cross dresser who has cuckold and caged me for years, the story kept me breathless. I am hoping that the wives have the husbands dress completely and become lovers of each other and other men.

greenman440greenman440about 5 years ago
Unpleasant story

So the Wife has gone from "normal" vanilla to cruel and despising of her husband in a few weeks. Really don't see why you turned it into such a depressing story. Guess it's like the other typical femdom saga's that start out mild and because the writer gets bored or impatient then have to pump all their fantasies/ideas into a short space of time. It's just not credible even as a fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Like several other commenters...

I thought that this story was interesting up to about where Nancy and Sarah told Ted that he didn't have a choice any more. The last page made me so mad that I almost one-bombed it.

Fortunately I read your comment first, where you said that Sarah hasn't really turned into the "super-bitch" she appears to have become. You said you would show us that in the next chapter. So I held my vote.

It has been over a year since chapter 3 was published. I hope you're going to publish chapter 4 soon!

AmunRa218AmunRa218about 7 years ago
Interesting

Also wondering how you decide to continue this. So many stories that turn fantasy to reality. Always wonder how to disengage when one person in a couple wants to back off or end it. Right now I don't see good things happening here. Obviously the wife now has no respect for the husband and threatens divorce. Nancy and Josh need some very bad things to happen to them. Maybe a good bonfire with their house would be a start. Not good when it gets to this point. Wondering which way you will take this. A good BTB tale could be in the offering. Then again maybe not. Will wait and see which way you take chapter 4 and beyond before voting. Just don't see good things.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Fetishism

This story is ridiculous. Maybe stay out of the Incest section next time, so you can keep your focus.

Love, Mom

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fantasy

Understand what you're trying to get across. Not bad and your writing is good. Everything was ok until the ending. Never was one to bow down to threats. Would have not been the one to leave but throw all three out. I'm always interested in a writers take on how to disengage after turning a fantasy into reality. Therein lies the problem. Obviously after Sarah turned him into a slut, she certainly has no respect for him anymore. To me the marriage is dead and deserves a spectacular ending. But that's just me. Might return to skim chapter 4 if it gets posted. 1 star for the ending. The rest was ok.

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