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Click hereI hired a part time housekeeper to do the housework and laundry. She worked mornings and I paid her well.
I met at church a young widow woman whose husband had been killed in Iraq. He had gotten what I almost got only his was a roadside bomb, not friendly night time fire. She is about ten years younger than me with one child. It took us about two years to become totally comfortable with the idea of new life partners.
We talked about a premarital contract. She didn't see the need for one but she had not gone through what I had. Sherrie drew us up one that had a strong infidelity clause in it for both of us. We both agreed and signed.
We waited until after the church wedding to engage in sex. She was passionate as was I was. I had kept my weight down and continued to exercise even more. That night, well, let's just say, awesome, We each had gone for years without and the sex that night, and for many more was just fantastic. The sex was covered over in love. I was prepared for a long stay and she made it all possible.
Well, readers, let me hear from you. Public or private comments are welcome. The next story will be lots shorter. I just got carried away on this one.
- COMMENTS
NoBullAl2 months agoVery good story!! Some a little far fetched but overall it mostly coulda happened!!
dgfergie3 months agoA very good story and truly Karma and some good legal advice ruled the day. All the excess money was dutifully shared with the families. Not like today's world where the top 1% hold more wealth the whole middle class in the US. Of course it's always nice to have money to make life a little easier. 5 stars.
Anonymous3 months agoWhere to start ... The author obviously out time and effort into the story and is freely sharing it with us so appreciation there ... agreed as some comments point it a need for grammarly type editing ... more than that though needs real editing to try and reign in the hyperbole, over frequent use of using and sayings etc. Not sure how this gets so many favorable comments. Neither character seems demonstrate real live or understanding. The wife no doubt, is in a narcissistic fantasy, but the husband is riddled with issues not the least of which is anger management and repeatedly threatening physical harm to his "great love". In this way they are a matched pair of narcissists.
Overall this seems a fever dream kitchen sink version that covers in paragraphs what could be said in a few words.
Anonymous4 months agoThe author took a refuse dump and gave us a beautiful park.
The story is loaded with positives. Not to give anything away I will just say:
A MUST READ!
The Hoary Cleric
Ctwistedpair4 months agoI enjoyed this ending. It seems very well thought out.
One constructive criticism though.... Get the Grammarly free version. It corrects grammar, syntax, and a host of other literary(?) problems.
Keep on writing!
Anonymous4 months agoThis is a much improved ending rather than Nici's ending in chapter 1. Although, the issue of Susan having an affair for over a year, loving both men, and there NOT being red flags galore around it is not really relatable.
Then there is the suggestion of rape, of prostitution, and possibly other issues involved. In ALL of these issues, there would be SOME sort of red flag present. I PERSONALLY, have been raped, and I live with another person who was serially raped, and I can confirm that there are a TON of red flags that come up in our lives from this.
I also believe that Susan falling into a comatose state or a state of "Non compos mentis" is a weak way of character development for her and a weak plot change.
sbrooks103x7 months ago"I met at church a young widow woman" - Poor syntax. "I met a widow at church." And "widow woman" is redundant, since widows are women. If it was a man, it would be "widower."
