by grimbous
Hell yessssss! What a great few chapters. Absolutely loving this story. I found the sweater Evelyn knitted Donny so sweet and adorable. Also great blowjob scene, v hot. Can't wait for more! Keep up the great writing :)
I really like this it’s very wholesome and it’s a breath of fresh from futa characters being portrayed is psychopathic serial rapists
So far I love your stories here,
I have a suggestion that may make it a bit more interesting: Alan becomes more involved with Donald's life, Kiki takes a turn for the worst, Evelyn and Donald are discovered. These are my suggestions and I think one or all will be a great asset to your stories. If they're not used it doesn't matter; you're work is still fantastic, either way.