All Comments on 'Son of Sleep Ch. 03'

Look forward to the rest

Keep it up! This has become one of my favourite series on Literotica!

Loved the part about how Hypnos found pride and joy out of his son. Good touch, where will the story go next will he conquer a new challenge, will he search for the true culprit that framed him, or break in his tormentors gf some more? Whatever it may be, I'm excited for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Very yummy indeed. I like where you're taking this as he learns more about his powers. Thank you!

I would point out that in Greek Mythology the most potent oath was to swear upon the river Styx, which was also known as the River of the Unbreakable Oath. Swearing upon their own power wasn’t a thing, but even gods had to keep an oath upon the Styx.

Outstanding chapter... I’m definitely looking forward to the rest!

I love the angle you’re taking

You have a vivid imagination inventing a god. The story is very good and it keeps my interest all the way through. Don't worry about the nay sayers. No matter what anyone says or does these days there are trolls just waiting to jump on them. They are weak and unimaginative. If they had any skill they would write their own stories.

I am really liking where you are taking this and look forward to more

Love it! Keep up the great work! Fuck the haters!

Nothing happened, as far as story advancement goes, at least where the MC is concerned. Tho there is some very small progression on the hypnos-secretary storyline, I don't feel it's enough to call it a chapter.

Just my opinion though, and it's worth what you pay for it.

Enjoyed the read. Really looking forward to seeing how this continues to develop.

Love all the fun complexities. This is a series I look forward too. Please continue~

Loving it. Please keep it going.

Not sure how many chapters you have planned but I’m looking forward them. It would be great if they were longer but I do understand one can only write so much each day. Keep them cumming! 😉

I would like to see his power grow instead of just being centered around his dick. Maybe Hypnos decides to give him another power. Maybe he hypnotizes his teacher and her gf into a threesum and he gets revenge on his oppressors and becomes popular and throws a party full of dubachary and sex. Maybe Hypnos sees an opportunity to give him more power to help with his plans and has Alex create him an army or mortals and immortals alike. Then there’s orgies of nymphs and the mortal girls like Paige and Barbara. Maybe Alex meets his brothers and sisters and Hypnos gets them together to create his army even faster

Amazing chapter. Taking the story on a great trail. Please keep it up 10:10

Hi. Don't know where you are planing to go with the story, but it would be very interesting if he has to mature and use his "gift" for something other than just HS conquests. Like bettering someone else's life, etc. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Only things I’d ask for is longer chapters and hundreds more of them! Keep up the amazing work!

I look for certain authors and your in the list I always scan to see if you have something new. As always it's in good form story has drama and conflict. You show the human emotion and the mental conflicts very well. Thanks for entertaining me for hours on end.

thanks!!

good sex, good story line. keep it going!

Please keep up the excellent work. You've attained that elusive but rewarding balance of good story-telling and hot sex in the world of mind control. Would love to see a little more description of physical acts of sex, specifically anatomy and perhaps clothing, but that's just my two cents. Can't wait to read more and see where this goes.

Honestly great work, i think the idea is inventive and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Just ignore the haters

I'm enjoying this little tale of yours quite a bit.

Please continue.

It be interesting if the MC met the mortal daughter of Aphrodite and tag team her with his dad

This was great!

No complaints here, keep up the good work!

Always followed your works and this doesn't disappoint as usual!!

Keep up the great work.

Love it so far

Would love for the Principal's secretary to walk in the door as Barbie is sucking on Alex's cock and turns him around to demand what is going on, when she she his cock and he gets both adult women to strip nude and fuck him during his detention.

Or better yet that happens and then Paige comes and gets him, catching him fucking the two school employees and he comes clean about what is going on with him as he fucks one of the two women, which turns her on a bit, with her planning on using this new gift as the means to find out who set up Alex in the first place.

Also, one amusing way for the gift to work is if it works on both women and men, so Alex can use it to brain fuck his male enemies, as well as to entrance entire classes, where he implants hypnotic suggestions into the minds of an entire class or give a series of specific instructions to specific persons.

This was great!

This is great like the porn version of Percy Jackson keep it up err going lol

Great story I like that it’s different than other hypno’s I am interested to see if you have his hypnotic suggestions make conscious changes in the characters

It's exciting, and it makes me want more, keep at it, please!

Thank you.

Can't wait to read on in future chapters! Well written chapters, and character development

You have a talent with writing! I’ve never been a fan of the girl looks at guy and instantly is hypnotized but I’m not going to complain. Why? Because this series was very well written and I still enjoyed reading it because of that fact. I’m not sure which series I’ll read next but I look forward to reading them all. Keep up the great writing!

Can’t wait for the next installment.

Great read! Pls continue the story.

Fast becoming one of my favourite series on the site! My only concern is how limiting it can be with him needing to show his dick to start the hypnosis, perhaps an upgrade from dad as a reward is in order? Also it would be fun to destroy some of the bitchy girls lives aswell, hypnotised them to masturbate in class or meet their parents after school with a cum facial? Don't need to do these things of course, I'll enjoy anything you write, keep it up!

very well written, hopeful for more :)

I'm really enjoying this story!

IMHO a perfect mix of filth and story progression. Keep it up. I love it.

Truly. This story series is great.

I hope you continue to write, you are talented,

please don't leave this story incomplete.

Loving your story so far, normally not the type to comment but just wanted to show my gratitude for your great writing.

Some "resistance" lol. Went straight to "I'm your master," and voila, all inhibitions instantly subverted lol.

Sure, this is the almighty hypno power, but still. Wasn't this just a *fragment* of that power? And didn't daddy-dearest want his son to generally *work* for things? It's iust a little too easy.

You can help me...

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With much love,

JC

I find the Hypnos distracting from the main story, probably because I don't know where you are going with it. Alexander screwing his teacher was disconcerting inasmuch as he was doing it completely against her will. But at least he unloaded into her mouth rather than her pussy, which could have caused very unfavourable future developments for her It would be more satisfactory for Alex to use his new Powers on his cute mom, wouldn't it?.

Really enjoying the series. I agree that you may want to place a bit less emphasis on Hypnos, but he is still integral to the story. Still this a wonderful read. Please keep the chapters coming!

Please no incest with the mom, shits gross. Stick with his best friend..

And for the love of God can someone get a creampie?! Every single time its outside.

This was an interesting "plot" development, I daresay! The sex scenes were amazing. Although I am noticing a pattern where he avoids anal sex and ejaculating inside the pussy of his Slaves... I don't mind the former but I am intrigued by the latter. Is it because he does not wish to complicate things by impregnating his girls?

Also, why is he limiting his hypnosis to just sexual favours? Why not other useful and EFFICIENT things? Like getting rich and such. Or getting free pass in his subjects. Getting the best university and passing it easier thanks to mind control. Getting the best jobs via erotic interviews. Dealing with workplace Billie's and such?

Dasvidaniya O Author mine!

I really like your stories! They are very creative and always excellently written. Keep up the good work!

I’m really getting into this story just as all your other ones impressed me I can’t wait for more.

L'histoire est super pour le moment mais les partit concernant just hypno me laisse indifférent je suis venu ici pour l'histoire d'Alexandre pas hypno, j'espère pour la suite de l'histoire que les suggestion se manifesteront même réveiller. :)

I liked it! keep it up LOL!

I like your stories and suspect that the haters are from the girl-power crowd. You have tags that reveal what your story is about so they can skip to something they prefer.

I like your creativity.

I don’t know or care to look about what other people say positive or negative about this series and about you as a writer.

I enjoy this. So thank you for writing it.

Sex scenes need to be longer

Nice

I really enjoy your stories, JC. I also applaud you for choosing a lesser known deity as, in my opinion, the implication that if a lesser God is real, then many, many more are possible is quite interesting.

Okay I really enjoyed reading your stories and I hope you continue this story as I would like to hear where your hero goes from here.

I like how you have the two separate stories going on with the small thread holding the together. The comment from the assistant about a good father also seems to strengthen the thread, foreshadowing that it may become a strong focus for the story. Nice job!

I get having the Hypnos character in this but not to the extent it covers half the “book”. 👍🏻

Hypnos' ‘Do I really have Divine ADHD? he wondered.' LILLED ME 🤣🤣🤣

Less Hypnos, more Alex fucking sluts and getting revenge. Some drama would be nice, like showing the revenge off to people. I feel like despite all the action there's nothing actually happening because no one remembers anything or finds out.

I read this story years ago and enjoyed it enough to read it again upon its rediscovery. Thanks for this, just wish it was longer.

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"That's what she said."

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