All Comments on 'Song of the Magicicada'

It's a pleasure to see your stories on Lit again. This was a quite imaginative tale with interesting characters. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Good luck in the contest.

Tom.

I felt really drawn into your story- it was an excellent read!

Another of you fine tales, enough twists and turns for anyone!

I enjoyed your story and reading your others. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

... and most enjoyable, even if you did write you're where you meant your! (Sorry, it's the pedantic language critic in me.)

Alex

I love all of your colourful creatures !!!

Your story contains much emotion.

I espcially love your line, about Sean Connery's voice ;)

Good luck in the contest, Molly !

Maj

Wonderful story by a fantastic author. You have written another great story Molly. Keep up the great writing.

I love fantasy erotica, a bit different than you usual tales. REMARKABLE!

Amazing story that almost paints a picture of another world with a surprise twist at the end. Good to see you back and good luck in the contest.

I like fantasy and I like erotica (Duh) but as the story was getting into the fairy world, it seemed to be a little over the top. The idea of a flock of insects picking up her clothing and flying away with it and her being helped by the giant catfish seemed a bit too much. However, it drew me in, especially at the end with the escape through the cave, and I found myself really getting involved.

Loved the fantasy erotica, enticing story.

As always your stories are sexy and amazing. Now I remember that I miss reading your stories. Good luck in the contest.

Oh what a dance we weave. As the list of comments show this is a deft exhibition of imagination and writing. Non erotic unless ur into rape and humiliation. This was my problem. There are a couple of fairy tale semantics like the insects . .BUT this IS Fairyland. My concern is with fantasy and consent. A real world multi edged sword. The seduction had to be complete. . No forced bondage. Or she had to manage to resist penetration. Even here in what I class as the Best site of it's www. kind there is evidence of educated deranged male thought. They can read and write, use tech, but like a neanderthal club. The talent is clear. The rom re missing person true fairy wish of Hollywood stature. In full credit there is a good chance you tried to please everybody and like in life such strategy can only please the fans. Typed with deference to your talent.

Thank you very much.

This was a spectacular story and I knew it was her grandfather lol

a great bit of Irish lore. thanks

amerish

I really Like the story, wasn't sure how it would end. For some of us it's when a story end's where a loved one return's home after along time missing. hope you will write more story's like this with heart. THANK'S

The ending was so fucking funny lmao! I don't even care about the smut, I wanna know what nana's gonna do when she sees gramps!