by Alice_Nicol
You can join the mile high club by having sex anywhere thats a mile above sea level.
Totally stupid. Sex on an airplane you don't own is like screwing in a public restroom. No place on any commercial aircraft is secure enough to allow screaming. This is right up there in realism with that motorcycle Elvis rode in the movies, where there was no road/engine noise, reverberation, and a six-piece combo. And he didn't have to watch the road. Rewrite with Elvis and Anne Margaret, and you might have something.
Gorgeous prose; good pacing. Excited by the imagery, and by her gradually overcoming reluctance! Like taming a horse, the gentle way with small signals and easy steps.
don't word the title as if it's really a question for suspense. everyone damn well knew this gutter slut would screw in every inch of the plane if able. this little sperm sewer leaves no one on edge as to whether she will or wont.