All Comments on 'Sophia's Choice Pt. 04'

'But it is'

Love it!

Enjoy your witty, maybe tongue in cheek play with scenes and the state of mind of your characters. Your female characters throughout your storylines feel real — never cardboard, always 3-dimensional with faults/flaws and invariably sinfully erotic. So, your lead into “Sophia’s Choices” held promise: “…be perhaps a little more unitary and a bit less episodic. It may also be a little darker…”. Yes, less episodic (never a problem) but do not detect any darkness, even mild; feels a bit disjointed without tension/angst even in humorous way. Maybe me looking for something.

I may have sold you a dummy, I'm afraid, migbird. Without giving too much away, things don't really get too dark. There's just a bit of ambiguity introduced as things progress, perhaps. So glad you're enjoying it, anyway.