by MissRoberta
great chapter. This chapter gave us a lot of insight in all the girls thoughts, we see how Jess has a tinder side or at least a façade of one. Thought she would dominate Sisi more than she has but we will see what all happens.
Interested to see who wins. Will the bitch prevail and make Sisi her pet, or will Sisi top from the bottom and change Jennifer's approach to life?
Still see far too many syntax errors and examples of using the wrong word. Although some descry the importance of grammar and word choice, it makes the difference between four and five stars.
This is great! Keep em going. I’d love to see a really possessive Jess, so if you could create more drama please.
Hey guys! I would like to let you all know that chapter 3 is already up and pending moderation. It's taking a bit longer than usual, so I decided to let you guys know so you don't start worrying about me dropping the series or something like that. Sending love to all! xoxo
Hot. Jess is not one-dimensional at all. But there is still some mystery here.