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Anonymous4 months agoNice premise.
But every sex scene was rushed. Lacked needed details. Lacked tension.
And you really need an editor/proofreader.
Three stars.
Anonymous4 months agoThis was so great, I'm very much looking forward to this series, wish I was him
Anonymous4 months agoThere were a couple of spots where it looked like you lost track of what was speech and what wasn't, and some of the speech needed breaking up with punctuation, but a good part 1, nonetheless.
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