All Comments on 'Soul Food Pt. 03'

i really enjoyed this chapter cant wait to see where this goes the only thing im not looking forward to will joining in but it is what it is ill read no matter what thanks for a great read

Please don’t make us wait so long for the next chapter.

2 stories in 1 day.. epic.. thanks Soul71

Unfortunately you have a couple more to finish.. That would be great

Really enjoyable chapter,looking forward to more to come, living the main character, will be interesting what happens with Will though don't know if it would fit in with him joining in with what was started in the first chapter and can't see Shawna with him seeing how she already started Denise was the only one for her just can't see how he'd fit in.

I like the thought of Will taking care of the mother then Denis and Shawna can just be the two of them and Will wont feel like he is not part of the family

Did NOT see that coming! I'm disappointed in how you allowed Denis to turn from our hero to something much less as his promiscuity is revealed. Your narrative implies some sort of damaged simpleton that allowed Patty to take him in order to "save" his sister. Not buying it, sorry. Hopefully your story won't "devolve" any further as additional installments come out. [I truly try to not criticize writer's plots, but when they diverge from the characters the writer presented us with for the last 2 1/2 chapters, yes I will and do call foul!] 4* (1 pt penalty...LOL)

This man is a genius, was hoping for a longer chapter. The waits are killing me.

But understandable from authors pov

Yes!!! And, as usual, each keeps us hanging and wanting more.

Why can´t the real mom be an asshole, why do they always have to tragic,, oh my god bad shit happened to me so i left you,, card to play?

And he just cheated on Helen and Shwana with the boxing bitch? Are they okay with that?

this chapter really fired up the story I'm dying to see what happened next in this tale

I'd forgotten this story. I had to read it all again. Not saying that it was a chore. But like another comment says, 'this chapter has reinvigorated this story'.

I'm so looking forward to more.

Don't make Will a loser. He deserves to some pussy too.

I agree with others as this part blew this story to the top of my must have more list, I've read this three times already. I never even imagined his birth mother making an appearance, brilliant twist.

Nice plot twist at the end....

Damn I hope this isn't the end of the story. I know it's an erotica website but every once in awhile I come across a story that even if the erotic parts where taken out would still be amazing. This is one of those. I'm dying to know the rest of the story. So many ways it can go from here and all of them have so much potential. I sincerely hope it continues.

Great story. Would be a shame to stop now.

Hope it continues

Great story plz continue

Hope to see more of this story soon. You seem to be running several different storys at the same time there all great but please don't abandon the Pharoahs Curse.

Still a great read looking forward to more.

Don't let poor Will be left out. How about Dennis reuniting with his biological mother. Will getting sexually involved with his mother. Don't mind if the sister and Dennis become a couple. And every one having a nice family orgy would be great.

WE NEED more CHAPTERS!!! Please

Let will suprise everyone and be a great lover. Just don't turn him into or Whimp or at least make him thicker than Dennis

Great, when is new chapter

It a very good story!

I just feel like it time for will to leave your story. The family is basically treating like a second class son threats to kick him out if he doesn't expect and didn't asked him to step up and now the sister too

seems as everyone get things but will. Time for him to leave them and see how that turns out. He needs to be heard

You are the Best Writer on site

Will should bring a girl home and let everyone hear how he fucks her screaming her lungs. Let them feel what he has to deal with while they have sex. I see comments about people not want will to join that confused me will is been the only person in the story to be treated like Shit in my opinion

Family behind going behind his back and threats mad at him come on now

I really hope that Will finds someone to satisfy his needs but I also don't want to see this become another "everyone fucks everyone" story. I like Denis with Shauna and Helen, I was disappointed that he fucked Patty but understand that some people want him to fuck all the women. Regardless Will should go out and find some new hottie to fuck.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

“ she wasn't stupid or horny enough to risk her job over meaningless sex. ” wish Helen had the same mindset as this Coraline lol but instead of job marriage.

Who cares about Will? He can just a gf and he and his bro/sis bond is great and he is happy for his mom! Ok he has desires he should get a gf

Very good story.

Him fucking Patty was random, but I'm quessing your leading with he fucks everything arc. Imo that drops you a rating.

Where is the next Chapter? Would have been 4* but a solid 3* is what you get from me.

Man I hope will fucks the aunt or granny or sister Bestfriend someone they been Shit on there real SON it's real not a incest story if you think about since will only blood son

I have to admit that I'm surprised by some of the comments.

I rather like this story and I'm looking forward to future chapters. (Though I am saddened to see Will becoming one of the "Bad Ones." That's going to crush Dennis.)

I like that most people in the comments care for Will being left out. Hopefully he will get some family loving too.

My most favorite Author! I hope you'll write another chapter to this story soon! 5 BIG FAT STARS and also a thank you once again.

Having Patty see Shawna’s family at the fight, and George proclaiming Denis as his son… it would not be realistic if Patty couldn’t figure out the underlying relationship. Good decision there. I’m kind of surprised that Denis wouldn’t talk to Shawna about other girls, before having Patty , albeit unexpectedly. Nice twist at the end, with Denis’ bio-mom thrown into the mix.