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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Ditto.

WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood3 months ago

WOW! Well written and vivid. Looking forward to more submissions.

muskyboymuskyboy3 months ago

Not a romance.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Collage?

Agree it is not a romance.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 hours ago

I have to agree with the comments below pointing out this is not a Romance story. Like a previous Anonymous, I cringed at "collage" and then I struggled with the poorly phrased "Was the static you with a bag making noise faking it?" I see potential, but you're not there yet.

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About me: If you think the style, punctuation or spelling is wrong your most likely correct .. None of my teachers ever gave me a passing grade in English ...and a D was fine with me … Just get me to shop class .. I am the dyslexic motor head that couldn't spell but got A i...