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All Comments on 'Souls Last Kiss'

by ShelbyDawn57

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

What an ending!

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AchtungNightAchtungNight3 months ago

Nicely done. Very hot, was surprised by the ending twist.

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months ago

Happy to so so many not taking the image at face value 😊 Em

Djmac1031Djmac10313 months ago

Succubus? Angel? Both? Intriguing end twist.

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangton3 months ago

Perfect, immersive imagery I could get lost in... loved it...

djripdjrip3 months ago

That's one way to ease the transition!

jhealy55jhealy553 months ago

Very well done. I didn't expect to it as emotionally as i did at the end, but i loved it.

CatDaddyoCatDaddyo3 months ago

I usually do not like such short tales, but if Shelby writes it, I will read it. Very clever, working in your happy ending theme. Is the woman good or evil? LOL Well done, so many things left to the imagination. Shelby, you are one of the best writers on this site, top ten easily. Thank you for keeping me entertained.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Like a poem re-written into a bad short story that was done by someone in high school.

CrazyDaveTrucker60CrazyDaveTrucker602 months ago

Well he was coming and going at the same time. 5 stars for the imagery

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Somehow I wondered if it would end as it did. Glad to see that it did. Nice work.

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Authors Notes: Lots going on right now. Wanted to give everyone a big heads up. The authors got together and challenged each other to write stories in exactly 750 words. Never one to back down from a fight, I wrote and submitted six. They span several categories; 2 Sci-Fi/Fa...