All Comments on 'Sound Asleep'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
So good!

This hit all of my buttons.

OhCeceliaOhCeceliaalmost 4 years ago
Oh, the things he says!

Love to hear a man talk like this. Agree, this pushes all of my buttons, too! Don’t like the words “slut” or “slutty” but it’s not so bad in this story. Cute, hot, and sexy!

GoddessViolet86GoddessViolet86almost 4 years ago
Great!!

I really enjoy you're writing!! Can't wait to read more!!

gkrishnagkrishnaover 2 years ago

Wish she didn't wake up so soon into it, but otherwise a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I swear the dirty talking gets me moaning.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please make a part two!!!! I always come back to this

Ellienora35Ellienora35over 1 year ago

Needs a part two where he and Hannah dominate Liv together until Liv has their babies for them. It would be a fantastic threesome story.

CurlyLuna18CurlyLuna18over 1 year ago

Totally need a past two! I love the way he kept talking to her! So hot!

the_leaky_penthe_leaky_pen9 months ago

Super hot! I love your prose

CherryFrostedCherryFrosted6 months ago

OMG. This story was like a dream! 10/10, loved your dialogue. Thanks for sharing!

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