All Comments on 'South Mountain Pack Ch. 13'

I love the story...one of the best chapters yet....can't wait to hear more and for Sophia to kick some ass

As always a wonderful chapter and Damian just gets better with each chapter. Whats going on with the prophecy? The part with Maeve and her Daddy too sweet for words. Victoria what a bitch. The Rossi men ragging on the Carlucci's, I laughed so loud I scared the cat. Emotions running all over the place but the love they have for each other shines through in everything you write.

This has been an excellent story so far! Can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!!!

I love this story!!! Great job!! 5 stars

One of the best story, you're in my top 10 fave writes here.

And you keep moving up with every chapter, the wait is long but well worth it.

Keep them coming.

DarkFaerie1801

Love it!!! Can't wait till your next chapter.

Love the SMP, the interaction between them all is so well written. Easily one of the best series on here…keep it going

just the right amount of humour to throw off the tension

I love this story I can't freaking wait for the next chapter I really want Sofia to kick Victorias ass lol

Lord this story is so worth the wait.You're a great writer, and i can't to read more!!! I hope victoria gets what is coming to her

Loved it. I read every page. Sometimes lengthy chapters tend to lose it's mojo and get boring.

I especially love when the guys have to watch over the small kids...they are so cute.

Love smp so much. It's a great story and very well done. Look forward to more when you have it. It's definitely worth the wait.

Another great chapter. Already looking forward to the next.

all I can say is this is one of the best chapters so far...the carlucc's how can you not love them. Sophia is so going to kick Victoria's ass....love the little ones...

I agree with pixie71, this is one of your best chapters. I loved every minute of it. I wish for there to be a showdown between Victoria and Sophia, like Antony vs Scott, especially since Sophia says she can kick her ass. Would be good to show her her place since she is to be future-Madame-Alpha.

Besides that... I need to know more! Amy Briggs questions regarding the daughters of the ranked pack members is very suspicious and probably connected to that feeling Aldo had about the School situation. (Sorry, mind all jumbled up.) Charles probably wants the whole pack to pay through their daughters.

IDK, just know I'm excited and can't wait to read more. Take your time and please finish this!

Great chapter!

I L-O-V-E this story!!! Damian is a riot! I cracked up at him instigating when Victoria called Sophia a child. That was some excellent writing my friend. I could see it play out in my head. The only thing that would have made it better was if Sophia actually beat her ass like she deserved! 5*! Keep it coming!

Just read it for the fourth time. loved frank and joes reactions seeing their mates in their cocktail dresses, how protective Anthony is with Sophia, and Alberto with Maria. Lorenzo, what are we going to do with you? Damians dialog and running commentary on life gets better and better with each read. Would love to hire Paulo to hook up my new printer. Dante and his obsession with Long Johns Silvers and thinking they are so good Luna must have invented them. So many things that are spectacular. keep up the excellent work and eagerly waiting for chapter 14.

OMG THIS CHAPTER IS SOOOOOO AWESOME. SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I cant point out one thing that I loved about this chapter because I loved everything!! Damian is still my favorite character but Victoria is the most hated! I wish that Sophia had punched her but being the future Madame Alpha I'm glad she didn't. I also think that Victoria will end up REALLY betraying the pack because of her jealousy. She knows toooo much about the pack! On a lighter note, I almost died laughing at the young ones. I mean "terlet" has to be the cutest thing ever. Even if they did hear it from their dads. I'm just so in love with this story. Thanks for the update and I anxiously but semi-patiently await the next chapter.

I agree with the other comments, Victoria needs a massive beat-down!!! The family dynamics, the love and loyalty of these families are fantastic. Hell, even the bickering and teasing is fun to read about because in every moment you can feel love. There is no maliciousness or evil lurking between them. That feeling is so strong that when you read about a new character you automatically size them up. You categorize them as friend or foe, there is no other. I can't wait for more. I especially like how you handle age appropriate relationship interactions. It is very respectful and in no way seems corny or sappy. It stands to reason that the levels of intimacy will run as deep as their love, respect and loyalty do. I am so thankful for all 10 pages and I am greedy for more. I will wait patiently, I know you will not disappoint. All I want to do is speculate on the future Alpha's, the significant of the power of the sisters, the politics that are sure to try to destroy or control what is not rightfully theirs to have. Wow. This is great stuff. Thank you!!!

I did not even get into the amazing qualities of the siblings, cousins, the little ones as well as the elders. The characters have traits that they don't know they have until tested. Ok, I will stop now. Lol - this story is amazing!!!

So good, I can see this as the basis of the next teen Were movie..... I'd go see it!

I want to see victoria end up with Luke....also, you continue to tease us by dragging out the Sal and Gabby story. Amazing as always!!!!!!

Wow! I am so amazed by how you handle your chars and this story! I'll be waiting on edge for the next chapter!

Another chapter

And what a brilliant one at that!

i am loving this story and i cannot wait to read the next chapter.

The characters are so lovable.

I tell all my friends that they need to read this story.

Thankyou for sharing

So very glad to come find a new chapter here. You are So very talented and I can't wait to read more.!

I found myself laughing at various points in the story. Smiling at the evolving relationships. And wondering just how Victoria and Amy connect up. Something is up there.Bring on the next chapter.. :)

thank you for the new chapter...can't wait for the next one!!! still wondering what info Dante will have on the silver eyes...looking forward to seeing the what you next!

Apple Jacks R O C K !!!!!

You are truly talented and a great story teller.

Your writing reminds me of Nicky Charles.

I just checked out your blog and I love the character pics as well as the landscape.

I think the renegade pack was making money from extreme bdsm prostitution, porn and ultimately snuff films.

One of my favorite chapters. I can not wait for the next one.

Your story keeps getting better and better I can not wait for the next chapter

:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

Please, I will help in any way I can if it will help you get the chapters out faster!! This was awesome, I know you have a life, but let's put that aside and focuse on what's important...SMP (joking here...but not really)! Honestly, great installment can't wait to read more

AMAZING! This chapter was flipping amazing! superb fantastic and just amazing!

The family and pack dynamics are just awesome! No matter how they punish Victoria, she's going to cause further trouble. Hell hath no fury like a teenage girl scorned!

I love this series. Just caught up on the last few chapters. The details are so intricate and pull you into it so well. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing such a well written story.

someone's in troubleeee Haha I love it. I can't beg you enough to hurry with the next chapter!

Omg I love how you have written this, please hurry with the next chapter I wanna see Victoria get in major trouble.

Ohhhhh please don't make us wait to long.

This is one of my favorite stories! I have read it at least ten times. Please write fast - can't wait to find out what happens next!

I hope Victoria gets shoved in her place, I think she is trouble for the future. Maybe you should make her Ric's? mate, give her someone else to fixate on.

Thanks for the update. I soooo love the length of the chapter it really gives lot of story to chew over till the next update. Thanks for sharing.

PBL posted the teaser for Chap. 14 on her blog in case some of her peeps didn't see the announcement on her FB page. It is beyond amazing.

I had read the teaser from the blog and it was great. I am Hoping that the elders decide that Victoria is guilty and she gets the harshest punishments allowed and that the other two girls don't because it sounds like they had been bullied into it.

Hi PBL,

I just love this story and you are an amazing writer.

I have been waiting forever for the next chapter, please upload quickly. By the way, I am in love with Damian, give him and Caitlin steamy sex scenes(when she is of legal age). I love Damian more than the hero of this story, he is as witty as it can get, so hoping for more of Damian & Caitlin.

Hey PBL, I know how hard you must work on this but please I'm begging you can we get an update on the next chapter because this cliff hanger is killing me.

Please update soon! Dying to read the next chapter!!!

Every so often I get a craving for werewolf stories. Thankfully there are some good one's on here. The re-read I did of your story didn't take long at all, and now I'm going stir crazy checking every day for the next update! Don't worry though, I understand how life gets busy and such, and like I've said to other authors on here: take your time and give us good quality -- and hopefully quantity -- instead of rushing through it just to satisfy our cravings and not being happy with the product you've created. Did that make sense?

I will be honest with you though, I have a hard time picturing all the Carlucci's looking identical because of their personalities. I always set Damian apart. For some reason I picture him shorter than the other older guys. I don't know why, haha. That's not the way I want it, that's just the way it is in my head. I've looked at your blog and have seen all the pictures you've posted. I love your choices for the Rossi's, Carlucci's and President Roberts. I used to watch NCIS all the time and think Mark Harmon is awesome. The only one I disagree with is Phil; I just can't picture Shemar Moore as a florist. It isn't being sexist. I have absolutely no problem with men and women having careers that aren't "traditionally" for men and women. I'm just too used to "Derek Morgan" and can't get that character out of my head when picturing Shemar Moore and then trying to wrap my head around Shemar Moore and Phil. But this is your story, not mine, so you can have it any way you want it.

^_^

I await -- with some patience -- Chapter 14, and I hope life is treating you well!

SH

I saw that in this chapter that Victoria knew who her mate was but you didn't mention who but that he was in her mind a commoner. Who is he and will you reveal him soon??????

Great story so many years later. Just wondering why they would bring all of their superior level weres to party and not leave any one at home for security? They know what is coming but still don’t leave enough back for security.