by XtinaSmith2017
can't wait to read more. what amazing picture you write in my mind, thank you really looking forward to more.
You are writing a wonderful story of love and lust, and I'm enjoying it all.
Looking forward to 'meeting' the niece, and Laura's long term relationship with Ash develope more if possible ;-)
My own ass is ready for the niece, hopefully she'll show no mercy!
This is my favorite story of yours. The road head part was especially exciting.
If you're searching for ways to improve, I'd be extra descriptive in communicating every delicious detail of how much effort it takes Ash to take Laura's cock :-)
I hope he gives her one last, long, deep, extra loving blowjob in the next chapter ;-)
Stunning enjoyable story written with so much feeling, Laura and Ash are a perfect couple will she be able to let him go ? Will there be a new love in Ash's life ?
Ash has found a truly beautiful lady in Laura and you never forget your first love but can not wait to read next instalment and see if Ash can keep two women happy
Absolutely love this one, can't wait for the next chapter
I really hope that you continue this story.eagerly waiting to meet the niece
Wonderfully told and this line truly sums it up: "in arguably one of the most feminine positions he could be, at her mercy, open and welcoming to her." Yeah, totally vulnerable, all but humiliating and no doubt at all about what is happening to him. He's getting fully, indisputably and totally fucked.
I loved it, especially the southern Hospitality. look forward to part 4
Normally a Dom top but was seduced at 18 by a gorgeous black shemale that just loved to seduce young white boys and got 4 loads from me the first time and forever hooked me on gurls with something extra. so I can relate to young Ash although I wasn't the bottom. But nowadays there is a cute little Latina vixen that enthralls me although i love turning a cute femboy and making him a little bitch boi.. I even will go so far as last weekend had one completely freaked when i slipped into his video room and afterwards the loo of surprise as he had Never been with a guy and beyond probably the best orgasm of his life (that's what he said) i feel he will be forever changed and not look at other men the same. Even when his body gave out and he was covered in sweat and came twice his cock never went down .. Hotly written and reminds me of similar adventures