All Comments on 'Spain'

Simple, not too hot and not too cold, far from stupid, believable/doable and in a great final shape of expression.

Also, the ending is cool, moving the audience away from that 'nasty' feeling that hits the air when reading erotic stories.

In other words, keep up the good work!

but somehow i couldn't get into it. maybe too much teen turbulence.

i was surprised a 19 yrs old was in highschool.

I find it very interesting that the media has warped our perception of what is and can be real and what isn't. I should've made it a little clearer (judgeing from the comments I got) this is a true story! This is how I lost my virginity. I would have loved to have sex before I was 19 but it just didn't happen this way (I've gone down on girls and gotten handjobs before that, but sex didn't happen until 19 and my first blowjob, which is a story I'm working on, didn't happen until about 3 months after I lost my virginity!). The story is 100% true, no names, ages, dates or places have been changed, I just wanted to share my deflowering with the good people of Lit. For future reference, I will put a disclaimer at the beginning of my stories, but anything written by me in teh first person actually happened to me as is!

7.5 in her 38 c 5ft 2 in. Impossible. Learn your anatomybetter. Another imagination by a horny kid with no knowledge of sex!!!

obviously u dont know jack shit urself, as this is completely possible, maybe if u had taken anatomy urself u would know a womans pussy can stretch and take a considerable amount more than u would think. Honestly crowdsurfer, i think u did a good job, u just need more details and need to elaborate a little more, otherwise, its pretty damn good, remember to detail the sex more too.