All Comments on 'Special Delivery'

by redpepperxx3

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MigbirdMigbirdalmost 3 years ago

Interesting scenario; can feel the potential, so am pleased to see “to be continued”.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good plot. Try adding more dialogue and imagery to further develop it. This story has lots of potential. :)

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