All Comments on 'Special Delivery Ch. 03'

Diner/Dinner. Every instance in all 3 chapters. Please. Above average editing otherwise.

Eww, thanks for spotting that. I will attempt to correct if Lit lets me.

Mmm, that's really annoying. I can't believe I missed that and I can't see any way to let me edit the story now it's posted. Maybe I'll have to re-publish the whole story? I'll have to do some digging to find out. That's going to really bug me.

Corrected versions uploaded. Should get fixed when the Lit admins complete the publish

Great chapter. As always well written and sexy as hell. As I said in my earlier comment my one criticism is now officially moot.