All Comments on 'Spellbound Pt. 03'

Got to read it first on patreon but wanted to show my support on here as well can't wait for more

3 words..............................fucking loved it. Lot of complexity in this part, I so appreciate how much you put into the character and plot development. You have so many good series, don't know how you juggle it all but I thank you for all you write.

Outstanding!!!!!

Another great chapter in this series looking forward to more.

This is, by far, my favorite of your stories. I like that it isn’t interconnected as some of your others so it can be a standalone read easier. I also think the world you are creating is really well done. It makes me want more, so please don’t make us wait so long between chapters.

Love this story, hope future chapters come out quickly.

Nice series. Can't wait to see what happens next

So worth the wait. Thanks for a great story. I hope another chapter comes along soon. Adam needs to show Jill some TLC. ;)

I honestly think this is the best Soul71 series. A interesting world being fleshed out more and more, an interesting cast of characters, and a lot of good plot hooks.

This is by far my favorite story on the site. I have been eagerly waiting for this to continue. Excellent work!!

Great stuff!

Would be great about his time in fae lands and a nice story

Have been eagerly awaiting the next episode of this series. Excellent work as always.

A very very good continuation of your series, look forward to the next chapter.

Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.

I must add my praise to the heap, Soul71. Many of your series are quite enjoyable, but this one captures the imagination. There is still so much left to be explored or unearthed. Few others will say this, but the time between submissions is sad (for me). Like so many others, "More, more, more, please!"

You have weaved your magic, can not wait for more !!!

Excellent story! The third part is every bit as interesting and riveting as the first two parts are. Please continue.

Love the story!! Looking forward to the next!

I've been really looking forward to you putting out the next part of this series and you didn't disappoint, now I can't wait for the part 4.

Awesome story the only problem with it is that it stops at page 11. I can't wait to read the next installment.

Just thinking ahead... So when Roselyn and Selene continue their relationship and the want of children overcomes them, is Adam available as a donor!?! I see Amanda and Jill moving in and the manor's master bedroom suddenly has a king size bed.

I actually read this part of the story as soon as it dropped and since have read it twice more. I'm waiting on you to get writer's block so you can start on Broken again. Ha!!! Great stuff. Thank you for sharing. Grouch6977

Love this series, can’t wait for the next part

So damn good I love this series

I wish next comes sooner than expected

Done it again good read. Next! Please

Is it wrong to hope Ada boinks Jill (lovingly of course) in the next part.

Excellent as usual Mr. Soul71. 5 BIG FAT SPARKLY STARS GONE NOVA!

Fantastic story. One of the best stories I have read on this site. This story had everything. Kept my interest from beginning to the last word. Hoping we don't have to wait too long for the next installment.

5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Was ok. Not as good as the 2 previous chapters. The build up and battle with Edward sr was very mediocre imo. After all that from chapter 1 and 2 this seemd to fall flat.

No doubt ill get grief from others with my opinion but, hey, thats Literotica for you.

Same basic story ideas over and over and over again

I really like this and the way he had a hole in his mind. like what do i do now that Edward is dead. very well played. cant wait for the next chapter. question do you have a patreon channel or discord channel. thanks

Epic story! Can’t wait do the next installment!!

So far, awesome storyline. Just wonder why he calls her mother instead of using her name. Me it's just me but he is using her as a fuck toy and she is okay with it. So why does he not use her first name in private?

More please!!!!

Loved it and wish there was more, this person's imagination is incredible.

Brilliant story please continue it.

Please release Chapter 4 soon. Got hook on first chapter years ago and had to wait for the next 2. Such a great story.

Cant wait to see what happens next totally hooked

Awesome, waiting for more!!!

What a fantastic series. Soul71, you have a brilliant imagination. I’m so excited to read the next part of the series!

I loved this series, as a lot of others did. There is a major problem. A majority of Soul's stories are incomplete. There is so much more that could be added. Maybe Soul ran out of ideas. I doubt that. The worlds he creates are amazing. I just wish he could finish more stories.

Next part please

Really looking foreword to the next parts of this and all of your other stories.

Thank you

This is a fantastic story, when will you have the next part. thanks in advance

I keep rereading your stories their so good. Hope you can continue all of them soon.

What did they talk Adam and Jill ?

Please tell us you are writing more of this series. I am looking forward to the adventures of Adam and Jill

I hope you are almost done with your next chapters, it is a great read. Thank you !!

Another series with great potential. I'd love to read more of this series and in this setting :-) Part of me wants to see this story fully fleshed out and published.

I'm also glad it's more of a story / novella and not just sex sex sex every second paragraph. Weird, I know, for a site like Literotica. Yet I think you have a rare gift in general to write longer, entertaining stories that really pull you in.

Oh, come on man you've got to give us more of this series, I wasn't even interested in reading it at first, but goddamn I loveds every chapter. I found myself really getting into all this magic and spells, and so on.Kind of wish I didn't love it so much but I cannot help myself, so please, please give us more.

More more more!!!! I can’t wait!!!!!!

I also can’t wait for the next chapter. This is by far my favorite of your projects.

Great story, looking forward to the next chapter. Like to see the relationship with Jill grow stronger

Please continue on with this story, it has been such a pleasure to read. This is a powerhouse story, and I can't wait for the finale

Mike

Great story telling. As usual. Please continue

Can't wait for more

I would like to read more of this story please

Great story would love some more chapters

You're storys are great I'm often checking to see which ever one has another chapter especially Pharoahs Curse and this story. Thanks for all your work, long may you continue.

Please continue when possible. Love Reading your stuff. Thank you

hope you finish it soon

not finished

more plz

Need more to this story. Would like to see what happens between Jill and Adam, and also Adam and Holly

Impatiently awaiting the next chapter. DMW aka Sumnut96

The Spellbound series is an excellent story!

Please continue with the story as I would love to see how it ends!

Reread this for the second time, looking forward to more chapters of this excellent series

Brilliant. This story and the Pharoahs Curse are my two favourites, hopefully you will continue both of them.