All Comments on 'Spending June with Rico Week 01'

by MarqLock

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I don't get it

An illustration ought to be above the 2nd grade art level.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
what art work

cheap crayons don't do art work....

can't afford crayons..stick your finger

in your ass then use your shit

to do the art work

MarqLockMarqLockover 5 years agoAuthor
Thank u

Thanks everyone. It's my first time ever doing anything in this genre so I appreciate the praise & criticism. Always willing to learn so I be better. But to the user that said, "cheap crayons don't do art work....can't afford crayons..stick your finger in your ass then use your shit

to do the art work". That was mad stale yo lol

MarqLockMarqLockover 5 years agoAuthor
Pointers

Give me some pointers on what I need to do, to make the dialogues more intriguing. I'm still learning so I'm all ears good or bad.

MarqLockMarqLockover 5 years agoAuthor
Genre

I meant to put the story under the Mature category, not Illustrated. My bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
About the worst I've seen here

I've seen pictures scrawled on walls of stalls in gas station men's rooms that were more erotiic than these. Does Literotica have any way of checking the age of a submitter. These appear to have been done by a 13 year old

MarqLockMarqLockover 5 years agoAuthor
Legendary

This a masterpiece. Yall are trippin lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice to see my 7 year old niece has become an erotic artist.

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