by MarqLock
cheap crayons don't do art work....
can't afford crayons..stick your finger
in your ass then use your shit
to do the art work
Thanks everyone. It's my first time ever doing anything in this genre so I appreciate the praise & criticism. Always willing to learn so I be better. But to the user that said, "cheap crayons don't do art work....can't afford crayons..stick your finger in your ass then use your shit
to do the art work". That was mad stale yo lol
Give me some pointers on what I need to do, to make the dialogues more intriguing. I'm still learning so I'm all ears good or bad.
I meant to put the story under the Mature category, not Illustrated. My bad.
I've seen pictures scrawled on walls of stalls in gas station men's rooms that were more erotiic than these. Does Literotica have any way of checking the age of a submitter. These appear to have been done by a 13 year old