All Comments on 'Spin Dinner Party Ch. 07'

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argeelogargeelogabout 2 years ago

So far, so good. We're hoping that you will continue this story as there is a lot more to cover yet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Your story deserves high marks. The characters were fun and the sex was hot. I do have some constructive criticism for you, too. The story kind of dragged in places, and perhaps you could have tightened it up by having fewer chapters. The dirty talk got a bit tiresome and repetitive. The bi-/homosexual theme was a real buzz killer for me. I would have been extremely disturbed if there had been actual man-on-man sex.

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Learning as we go. Need help from an editor. Any volunteers?

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