by sangovese
So far, so good. We're hoping that you will continue this story as there is a lot more to cover yet.
Your story deserves high marks. The characters were fun and the sex was hot. I do have some constructive criticism for you, too. The story kind of dragged in places, and perhaps you could have tightened it up by having fewer chapters. The dirty talk got a bit tiresome and repetitive. The bi-/homosexual theme was a real buzz killer for me. I would have been extremely disturbed if there had been actual man-on-man sex.