All Comments on 'Spin the New Years Bottle'

Thanks for the great read. It built well. I hope to see more from you soon. Cheers!

Having played the game, more than a few times, I enjoyed how real your description of it all was...Thanks...Phil

now we really want to know where the game goes from here!

There is no possible way you can write that story and not find someway to finish it. The game is amazing and can only get better. Would be nice to see the guy get something out of all this after watching his girl get off.

Very nice, cept for the ending was a bit wanting....I usually dont read sequels but this needs more....

more erotic events....more captivating playeers....more of the inventive and exticing flavor you gave in the original....nice

Great beginning to a hot tale. You have to finish the party.

I enjoyed the way you approached the story. Normally these party game stories arent very good and tend to be a boring blow by blow with too many charactors for a short piece. I like the way you focused on the couple and used the other players as needed as opposed to a telling us about every single kiss. I also like the little touches of realism like the choice between nudity and feeling. Anyone who has ever played a game like this knows that limits of some type are usually set to get the less adventurous to play.

My only negative comment is the ending. I dont have a problem with the action stopping before the usualy mass orgie, actually i prefer their first game to only go so far but you could have at least given us that. Some type of wrap up.

Keep writing!!!!

I enjoyed the way you approached the story. Normally these party game stories arent very good and tend to be a boring blow by blow with too many charactors for a short piece. I like the way you focused on the couple and used the other players as needed as opposed to a telling us about every single kiss. I also like the little touches of realism like the choice between nudity and feeling. Anyone who has ever played a game like this knows that limits of some type are usually set to get the less adventurous to play.

My only negative comment is the ending. I dont have a problem with the action stopping before the usualy mass orgie, actually i prefer their first game to only go so far but you could have at least given us that. Some type of wrap up.

Keep writing!!!!

Get a new girl friend unless you like having a slut wife

Great story - look forward to the next part!

A very well written story. I hope it comes with a second chapter and is as interesting as the first part.

Nice, hot, sexy start but ended too soon. Great build up but ended too soon.

How did the rest of the game go?

I would love to get inside your head