All Comments on 'Spirit of Exploration'

"...the extra weight of their docked shuttle had started its drift towards the planet." ---

--- "...the extra mass..."

A given mass of X in different gravitational fields will have different weights.

Whoa! You need to go back to school and take a creative writing class. That was awful

1.79 that's all one needs to know about this one.

I wish somebody would put up a troll extermination quest through the local guild. This category is being overrun from the current infestation.

The extremely low readers' rating is speaking more than any word: not even the mere 2 stars. What's the point to keep pushing fetish-cuck fantasies in this LW category, where the vast majority of the readers hate them (and rate them very badly) ? It's a waste.

1*- that all I'm going to say about this one.

Has to be meant as a joke, because it really is that bad. Two followers? Must be the author and his mum.

"I wish somebody would put up a troll extermination quest through the local guild. This category is being overrun from the current infestation."

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Or saying it better: "I wish somebody would put up a fetish-tales extermination quest through the local guild. This category is being overrun from the current infestation of fetish-cuck-interracial-gay-lesbian out-of-place tales"

Well shit! I actually liked this story. So over the top and genuinely funny. Only complaints are that it needed more metric system and, as is often the case here, the word should be ‘unfazed’ rather than ‘unphased’. Humor and satire might have made for a more applicable category, too.

Haaaa, she had already banged the crewman