All Comments on 'Splashdown Ch. 09'

"I can't thank you enough for reading and especially for those who have offered ways to improve." Too bad you didn't take the advise.

This is what I’ve been waiting for the whole time—Femdom agitprop sex scene.

How the hell did he maintain his erection with her spouting about Alexi, mid-sex? The way Peg continues rehashing in increasingly greater detail, seems similar to how she treated him pre-mission: forcing him into a corner, forcing him to make undesirable decisions. In this case it seems she’d like to leave him; but she know if he kicks her out, then she becomes the sympathetic character (making Gary the villain).