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The end. Thanks for reading!
- COMMENTS
Mrwonderfulll423 months agoI think this is one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time. It was well presented with just the right amount of buildup. As always when there is a great story I think a follow up is warranted. I hope so, please.
Anonymous4 months agoExcellent writing, careful, editing, and a refreshingly firm grasp on basic grammar. I did not mind the length per se, but I did find that after such a long and careful build up the eventual sex – although well written – was slightly anticlimactic and abrupt.
The only complaint I have regarding the narrative is the smoking scene, which was a major turn off and inconsistent with the characters. You could have explored so many fabulous options for her final full nudity, rather than standing around with a bunch of losers smoking in a crowded gazebo.
Anonymous5 months agoGood story, well written, and worthy use of enough supporting words / comments to paint a decent picture of the action.
