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- COMMENTS
Mrwonderfulll424 months agoI think this is one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time. It was well presented with just the right amount of buildup. As always when there is a great story I think a follow up is warranted. I hope so, please.
Anonymous4 months agoExcellent writing, careful, editing, and a refreshingly firm grasp on basic grammar. I did not mind the length per se, but I did find that after such a long and careful build up the eventual sex – although well written – was slightly anticlimactic and abrupt.
The only complaint I have regarding the narrative is the smoking scene, which was a major turn off and inconsistent with the characters. You could have explored so many fabulous options for her final full nudity, rather than standing around with a bunch of losers smoking in a crowded gazebo.
Anonymous6 months agoGood story, well written, and worthy use of enough supporting words / comments to paint a decent picture of the action.
sadimgnikover 1 year agoA great yarn!
Spring Break in the US sense is not something that Australians share - our closest analogue is "Schoolies" - the annual end-of-highschool event where there is certainly lots of booze and sex - but given that most participants are only 18, it's not as hedonistic.
That, coupled with the fact that I'm too old for those shenanigans means I don't have memories like those of Brian and Libby - but your writing makes me feel as if I have :-)
SeaReaderover 1 year agoI love this story, which explains why I just read it again for the third time over the past few months. Well written, carefully edited, supremely hot and sexy, its vivid imagery pulls me right into every moment and keeps me engaged and invested. I really want these two to continue together, and hope you do too. Thank you for a satisfying and sexy read.
JohnBerginover 1 year agoAuthor@Anonymous- All the main characters in my stories are based on people I've actually known. Their trait combinations may be rare, but they aren't at all unbelievable. I'm a big guy who played college football and majored in engineering, myself. Not everyone fits a narrow stereotype.
