All Comments on 'Spy Girl'

by Marianna2

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Pulsifer42Pulsifer42about 8 years ago
Lost momentum

Story gained flow only to fall apart with no conclusion......a hanger. Too bad as it was moving along very nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
One thing I hated.

I hated, that when she flashed back to the events, we changed to his perspective as he fucked her...it was a bit strange, I thought. So speaks Azathoth!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sexy ...

Enjoyed your stories and hope you post more...Very sexy....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I liked it.

I enjoyed your story. It is nice to see a plot, along with sexual tension.

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