All Comments on 'St. May's Fight Club'

by tesskay00

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

wished the actual fight scene was longer but other than that loved it

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

You hit one of my pet peeves - authors who don't let on their story is only part one, until after the end of the chapter. In the future please note the part number either in the title or in the story tag line.

CharmlesCharmles2 months ago

Love this. Looking forward to Part 2

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Great story! Ignore the other anonymous pet peeve comment

toesucker1toesucker1about 2 months ago

Very nice! My only suggestion is that in the future, Vic finds the toe sucking a lot more erotic now that she's fully embraced her role.

letsgetiton0letsgetiton0about 2 months ago

Love these type of stories. Would love to read part 2

Qwer12Qwer12about 2 months ago

Outstanding and 5 stars. Well developed plot line and great character development. Ready for our little sub to have her world rocked. Cheers

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