by tesskay00
Outstanding and 5 stars. Well developed plot line and great character development. Ready for our little sub to have her world rocked. Cheers
Very nice! My only suggestion is that in the future, Vic finds the toe sucking a lot more erotic now that she's fully embraced her role.
You hit one of my pet peeves - authors who don't let on their story is only part one, until after the end of the chapter. In the future please note the part number either in the title or in the story tag line.