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by EliasDith

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good. Some language issues, rushed in spots. The last two bits need more to be worth including. I like the creativity and the narrative style.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lot to love, number one love the description of the alien planet and the hotness and creativity of the scenario. Love mindbreak stuff. I would like to know what the kids look like out of sheer curiosity. Please do more like this! Preferably with an albino girl.

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I'm a tired gal, trying to put as much as I can down. Diablerie marks the longest I've ever worked on a story, and I intend to finish it.